ummm i'mma read it again. cuz i didnt really catch what u were getting at....

it was aiight upon the 2nd read. not sure why everyone one of your 2nd lines in each stanza contradicted the 1st or just didnt really connect with me. its kinda hard to comment on a piece that i dont understand so i'll just leave it at that. and maybe u can explain lil more for me

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