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Old 04-26-05, 03:28 PM   #13
Calm
Divine Ascension
 
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dope. i liked this one. felt the woarmth and love u felt for this girl. well i assume its a girl. but anyways your descritiveness is great. i really got into this one. it was a genuine love poem and not the run of the mill mushy BS i liked that. keep it up
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-Transcending The Heavens-
I am before before...
Before death is eternity, After death is eternity.
There is no death, only eternity.
And I be riding the wings of eternity...



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3 Poems.:.3 Features.:.3 Weeks Consecutively
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