Voted For: E.C

now u see me , now u dont
i've got da flow locked cus im straight frm da block
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naaaaaah, you bigged yourself up in that bar, try an stay away from that

im da original dapper rapper
E.c u got nothin on me
u is just some vanilla ice wannabe
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dunno why you had the ''dapper rapper'' line in the verse, that was pretty pointless yo, just try focusing on your oppenent an make fun of him, not fosuc on yourself lol

Explicit content dont make me laugh
im gon show u da strength of my wrath
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the first line i was like aight aight, he gonna come with a hard punch...but naaah, you didnt, the wrath line is not makin him look dumb, ya feel me??? its just...well another pointless filler

i may of faltered in da first match
but imgon bring it on in da rematch
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naaaw, sorry, once again...stay focused on dissing him, not stating facts, use the facts too your advantage an twist them into disses an punchlines, ya feel me dogg?

u fort it was over its only just begun
im gon take u out & slap u silly and den u'll be on da run
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not feelin this bar at all homeboy

u think ure my idol
man ure no idol mr.squeky voice & gap tooth
ure just some test tube baby gon bad
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okay that was better, because you actually dissed him, but the shit didnt rhyme, so it still had no effect

yo remember wen i had u , dis clown fort i was the game
but but he still fort 50 was my name
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nope, weak bar....g-unit lines are played out

so know u now i cant be touched
i gon knife u man u can call it butched
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not feelin that either lol

on the whole, not feeling ya verse at al...first thing first, improve structure, dont seperate lines with the big gaps...an dont have fillers that dont rhyme with anythin an that bigg yourself up

diss your oppenent, an stay focused on him with your disses....

E.C:
i battled you before, rematch it is but i thought we were through,
2 lines the first time, and now shit that my cousin writ for you,
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It was aight, flow was there an you actually dissed your oppenent, an not bigged yourself up like the other dude lol..

it says ten but u be a dumshit and go for 20 lines... are you blind?
this guy must be, to think his two liner verse was better than mine,
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thats better, nice build up line, an the personal connected well, decent stuff

you got butt plugged... shamin needs to have more "space" for "uranus",
take your head out and stop thinkin u got the skills to be famous,
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not bad, not bad, could of maybe worded the first line better, second line was effective tho

how can u be ghetto when you live in gately, you can't hack me,
its hard to comment on whether you are black or a paki,
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no no no, dont mistake us for pakistanis!!!!...but i can imagine some rv folks not likin the second line

aint racist but i spit the truth, shamin'll be hitting the roof,
you aint no rapper, its one of those fazes you go through as a youth,
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the youth line had me like ''oohhhh'' haha....

good shit, E.C
Ya get the win hands down
for not biggin yourself, for actually dissing your oppennet, an for having some complexcity about your verse, good job

RTF In my battle with J-DOT
Thanks y'all

Peace out.

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