yeah, this was cool....super imagery, easily relatable which can get the reader involved more with the message you're trying to send....i liked it, good idea and you wrote it very well....not as much emotion, mainly because i think the topic and the angle you took didn't allow for that much, plus it didn't really need it......this was a good poem to just ponder on, and relate, haha, i like those........keep up for sure

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