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Old 04-26-05, 04:59 PM   #2
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Hmmmmmm nice disses, personals and punches were flying everywhere.


Lyrical mastermind

Nice flow, don't stretch your lines too much. And make your verse more complex. Punches and personals was good in your vere.


Tony green

You need to word your sentence correctly, cause your punches was a little confusing but i still go them.


T-storm-

Nice lil vere there, you had good flow. Nice personals with a diss

Str8 good diss yo

8/10


RTF in my om in "Bad dream awake"
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