yo besides what the bimbo said above me u actually had some really good emotion...but u had it kinda simple and short make sure ta make ur open mics longer and keep elevatin wit ur vocab homie...and pleez tell me u black cuz otherwise u have no right sayin the "N" word yo...but anyways 6/10 woulda been alot more if u had a longer open mic and more complex vocab....keep it up homie...uppin for this kidd