hmmm, this was ok, not the best i've heard from you, your rhyme scheme and lyrics were good, but you sound the same in every track you do, now, if you make a cd or something to show out,it will sound drab because of this,mainly, in the music business, as you know, they look for different style, something that pops out, i liked the dialogue in the middle, some funny stuff, but you're overall delivery wasn't as good or ear catching as some other songs you've done.

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