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Old 04-26-05, 08:52 PM   #8
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word......first two verses had mad stretched lines which took alot away from the flow and enjoyment......so if you took a little more time to work on the structure, coulda been a solid diss......but still, you guys used alotta played concepts, nothing really special here...first verse had too much self glorifying and not enough dissing.....second verse, tony had some okay stuff, first line played.....but overal it was decent.......tstorm, solid verse, best outta the three, keep up......word
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