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Old 04-26-05, 09:15 PM   #14
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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Magik takes this battle... The punches were understandable and hard... The structure could be better... For example minimize the .............. and get straight to the point... another thing is your vocab... it isnt bad, but it does need to be uped... this isnt your best battle by far, lol... no hate... Now morse code... your shit was aight... I wasnt really feeling what you had to say... your vocab was aight, your punches were kinda wack here and there, no hate... your structure was off as well... so Magik takes this...
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