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IP:
Hmm.. This Was An Iight drop..
If felt it could have been alot better,
You Had Some Nice decent punchlines...
Personals were on tact , they were really hitten ...
Some were just fillers, but that can be worked on..
Structure was off , try to match up your bars ,
and not have it like a heart beat...
overall keep it up, you did a nice OM' Just
Elevate on your Structure , and Harder Punchlines
And work on your wordplay ,
Ps: Drop a link or this will be closed
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