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Old 04-26-05, 10:12 PM   #12
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this was ok. nothin really stood out to me that much. yall need to work on ya flows, they are mad f'd up. most verse were pretty basic. , seemed like yall tried to use too many personals so the shit was cluttered or somethin.

lyrical mastermind= this was ya only good bar
I make da res of u niggaz dissapear like a black hole in space...u 'Untrace'
Yall will alwayz b 'onestepbehind' im leavin u shook like and1 .MIXTAPE.

tony green= ya flow is all over the place, need to make ya punches more creative
ya only good bar was
My dick is for women only so E.F. niggaz can stay off.
I'm something like Shaq and the Lakers cause when I left they aint even make the playoffs.

tstorm= u got the best flow out of all three especially on the last one u did but u aint really do much in ths joint, but ur bars were decent cuz they had some creativity so u had the best verse out of the 3
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