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Old 04-26-05, 11:47 PM   #25
B. Magik
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Marv:

Punches: 9/10
Personals: 7/10
Wordplay: 10/10
Structure:10/10
Flow:10/10
Overall: 46/50=92%

This verse was dope man...Nothing less than what I could expect from someone with your level of skill...Everything was hot as hell, but you could've added a few more personals in there...Good shit

Pyronix:

Punches: 5/10
Personals: 4/10
Wordplay: 5/10
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Overall: 30/50=60%

To be honest, this shit wasnt that great...Punches lacked creativity, and they failed to hit very hard...The structure and flow are fine, but everything else needs work...Just my honest opinion...

RTF with the links in my sig...
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