Voted For: Valor

LINE WHAT DID YOU DO??
Your peice was killer right up untill the last few lines..!!

I read yours second and I was really feeling the waking up in a cemetary after you die theme, it was dope.. But then right at the end you didnt pull together a good conclusion for your peice, it sort of lost it.. -----_____--------

Both of you need to work on using different bar structures more often to switch up your flow because your lacking in assonance, n multi syllable rhyming sequences.. Plus your flows get choppy at times..

But yeah, Valor got the battle.. Only because he stayed on topic and didnt fall off at the end.. It was a shame line man..

Decent battle tho..
Peace.

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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