Voted For: CriTiC

Critic-

Nice verse man, good flow. Imaginary was decent in your piece, putted alot of details in your verse. Emotion was Good also, i could feel what the character in your verse was feeling. Vocab is decent, nice using the right words. Wordplays was decent also. The angle you came was nice.



Mizz fyre- Hmm not a bad nice, but nor also great. You had imaginary, but to me it was poorly weak, more basic too. The emotion though was good. Vocab needs to be upp a little. The flow was good. You came in a different angle that which was weak also.


Overall- This is a nice battle, critic you had imaginary and emotion drawn in your verse, they were decent, have nice flow. Mizz fyre nice verse, but not so great, you had imaginary drawn in your verse also but to me it was poor, you need to create better images than that. I felt the emotion, it was nice. My vote goes to critic, for having good images, and good emotion in his verse. Mizz fyre, you had poor imagination, and that what lost you in this battle. Vote critic for having better imaginary plus good flow with good emotion.


Critic RTF in a battle "Valor vs Line"

Honest vote. Pz

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