ehhhh.... a lot of ya disses were pretty much set up the same way throughout the first 2 verses... last verse was most solid... I agree with dude that said it was kinda basic... if y'all woulda seen each others verses before they were posted ya prolly woulda changed some stuff... me, personally, if i woulda saw my man doing the whole nameplay thing... i woulda just stuck with personals and punches.... got real creative with the facts surrounding the beef... inform the readers what the deal was... like the line that said

I'm something like Shaq and the Lakers cause when I left they aint even make the playoffs.

it was a lil stretched but that's what i'd stick to