Originally Posted by Mr. Dope to you
Voted For: Valor
LINE WHAT DID YOU DO??
Your peice was killer right up untill the last few lines..!!
I read yours second and I was really feeling the waking up in a cemetary after you die theme, it was dope.. But then right at the end you didnt pull together a good conclusion for your peice, it sort of lost it.. -----_____--------
Peace.
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