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Old 04-27-05, 02:59 PM   #12
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Voted For: Phy-Sicks

phy..
first bar was counter productive and illuminating as pertains to ur knowledge of tha streets...da best hustlers gotitforcheap
duhh...second bar sounded like u were calling ur self gutless
it ended cool...third bar was hot but shouldve been worded better...forth bar sucks. closer was funny and flowed well...

pre...
opener didnt rhyme very well...second bar couldve been worded better but it was funny all the same...third bar was whack...forth bar had me rollin...once i got it...didnt like ya closer for power or flow...

pre had better struc but phy took it wit da closer
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