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A vast loss of great minds, no longer embarked on a metaphysical journey to the constellations
That Part Stood Out To Me The Most .. You Chose Your Vocab Very Wisely Which Was A Good Thing .. Its An Inquisitive Poem And I like That .. Imagery Was Good Emotion Was There .. The Only Fault I Found Is That I Didnt Like The Ending And You Made It Rhyme But Really Didnt Follow A Rhyme Structure .. But It Was A Good Poem No Doubt Stay Up...
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Warrior •:KO:• lyrical clarity •:KO:• dfunk •:KO:• Blackmage •:KO:• CrazyDogg •:KO:• sdizzle •:KO:• Big City •:KO:• Typical •:KO:• Ill-Grammatix •:KO:•
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