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Old 04-27-05, 06:16 PM   #8
Charlie~Manson
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Voted For: D523

Young BLaze
I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook…
Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books...
^Alright
Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son.
Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!!
^Another ok line

Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash..
Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft...
^BANANAZ
A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter…
The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater…
^Hot
With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness..
Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas..
^good

D523
Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention
Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension
^good...funny
Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee
Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy
^hot
Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up
You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up
^play'd
Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice
It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice
^funny
Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer
13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number
^wack

Overall I would both yall verses was hot but Blaze had more punches and thats what I like in battles D had some funny lines but i like blaze style a lil better so I give my vote to him

v/Young Blaze

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