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Dont beef in this forum please... or you will be banned
About the peice.. This was an okay , drop
Ive seen alot better from you fate...
You had some okay personals , some okay punchlines..
Structure was okay, ...Alittle off , next time try to match up
your bars... You had some fillers in your drop , but it was an okay drop
overall keep it up elevate on wordplay, and stronger punchlines
thankz for the link
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