Originally Posted by Kin*Ethic™

A vast loss of great minds, no longer embarked on a metaphysical journey to the constellations

That Part Stood Out To Me The Most .. You Chose Your Vocab Very Wisely Which Was A Good Thing .. Its An Inquisitive Poem And I like That .. Imagery Was Good Emotion Was There .. The Only Fault I Found Is That I Didnt Like The Ending And You Made It Rhyme But Really Didnt Follow A Rhyme Structure .. But It Was A Good Poem No Doubt Stay Up...