Voted For: SoLo

MarvJays Verse

in a few i should c alot of deals,u pre write i dont n im hotta still.
solo broke his pockets like da "white house" he aint gota "bill".
^ 2nd line aight but 1st line a lil self-g

u da vet on dis month way da go,yea probly da best in da UK.
but hold up listen fruit cake,im 1009 times nicer than yOU,K!
^ blah self glory

wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats.
solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak".
^ lol this was good i liked it

ur 2 sweet! fag "sit down" cuzz i really cant "stand" homo's.
not da "star wars cat" i'll cut off ya limbs n beat u wit ya "hands-solo".*
^ nice name flip but a lil played on the gay thing though...but good

u all text only time u were in da "booth" u "confessin da preist".
i'll put ya "heart in da air" since u got trouble "catchin da beat".
^ nice punch good rhyme

fam u neva was KiNG neva see u stand on da throne.
y's ya name SOLO u need crews u like "babi's","cant stand on ya own".
^ good closer again name flip all in all good

Overall
i was impressed this was good overall 2 things though you should work on. 1 lose the self-glory...audio perhaps you can get away wit it but i've learned in text, self-glory harms verses and it took 3 bars for you to kick in. 2 the layout of your verse is like how a newb would type, it's horribe u & you neva & never exactly the same why do it?...but other than that cool verse was good


SoLo's verse

RV Givin Birth To Major Herbz..Now Y’all Know What Marv’s Been Fuckin…
I Set This Battle Twice..Marv Must Be A Quack The Way He’s Been Duckin…
^ good opener nice rhyme good flow

Yo Bitch I’m Cookin..You’ll Get Burnt Like Ya Sittin On The Gateway To Hell…
Desperate To Get KO’ed Aren’t Ya “Jay”………”K”………You Can Have The “L”…
^ lol good bar i liked

I Hear Ya Yell..“I Run RV!” “I Run RV!” Man It’s Like Ya Mouth’s Set On Repeat…
Marv The Only Way You’d Be Runnin Shit Is If Ya Crap Came Out With Feet…
^ LOL nice bar good punch...real steady diss

Ya Gettin Beat..Wanna Name Me Ali…Cuz I Am The Greatest In The Ring…
Marv Agrees!! Now I’m Solo But Its Clear He Still Thinks Of Me As The King…
^ nice link...self-g a lil on the 1st line...2nd debatable i'll explain in my overall

This Bitch Can’t Spit A Thing..He Just Throws Hands Like He’s A Mime Rappin…
Spits Like A Box Of “………” Streets..Cuz “Quality” Is What Ya Rhymes Lackin… *
^ nice for americans who DON'T know quality streets really are assorted box of chocs...nice bar

Wack Lines Ya Packin..Smoked 1009 Jay’s Now Marv Thinks His Skillz Are High…
Fuck Bein A Nightmare Ya Lyrics Are Suicidal..Make Me Wanna Pop Pillz ‘n’ Die…
^ good closer

Overall
More consistant verse i think now to explain the king/ring bar, that could seem like self-g but overview and also using a link is good which turned this bar from a self-g to a personal not much wrong with this really but this was in my eyes a decent battle...so i'm jus going on consistency in lines and my vote is for...

SoLo

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