Voted For: efecx

efecx.............ya structure was off man, ya shit needs to be like a box with all lines kept the same length, lucky for you though it didnt fuck up ya flow, but ya need to watch that in the future. ya opener was kinda weak, the 2nd line was a failed attempt at a decent meta. the closer also was pointless, just a filler line, ya shud have just stopped at thirteen........in between you was better, ya had sum decent punches in places, some weaker in places. the vocab was not that bad, cud be better so ya mite wanna work on that....try droppin in some more metas and a few multies and work on hotter wordplay........overall this was a pretty average verse...........6/10


REDZONE..............like efecx, ya structure was off, and ya structure was off more than efecx. ya flow wasn't that bad although it was kinda choppy to begin with but got better. ya opener was pretty much filler and shit talkin, no real punch in it.........closer was better but it was still along the same lines as the opener. ya verse wasn't as long and in between i think ya was pretty weak.........no real punches that stood out!!! ya had like one real punch and no real personals in there.....vocab was pretty much all basic, no decent wordplay and metas and multies were lacking to.........elevate on all of that........overall 4.5/10

V/ - efecx

Return the favour on one of my battles!!!! Links are in my siggy!!! And no hate or nuthin, but if ya don't return the favour i'll have my vote removed!!! likewise if ya leave no feed and ya vote gets removed from my battle then i will get my vote removed!!!! nuthin personal its just i'm tired of ppl sleepin on my battles!!! or droppin no feed so the vote gets removed anyway!!!! thnx pz!!!!

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