Light Weight
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This was feedback posted for Stanza
IP:
Battling me, Stanza’s going to have an early fate
Thinkin he a “heavy” threat, but he only “light weight”
No, played..
He thinks he’s legit, talking all the shit he spits
But that’s not the mic that’s my dick get up off it
No.....................no..............no......... .
Thinking that you’re a big shot cause you can use curse words
I’d spit some personals at you, but your not even registered
Eh
Your whole flow is wack, matter of fact, everything about you is a shame
Your from West Coast, call me 50 and ill turn my back on u like u Game
Terrible............
Stanza, face the facts kid, you’ve just been outdone
I won before the verse was written, consider this your final run
Eh...
Watch Me Spit this heavenly shit so Heavely Sick
you never can never get in my ass with Yo Lyrical SHIT
Alright...
Im Crushin "The Kid" Like "523" times and countin
D couldnt flow if he came out of a Water Fountain
OK punch..
Do you smell that fire?....,..Watch me extinguish Him fast
so When the ppl come to vote they gone need oxygen mask
Flow was better than the punch..
This Dude Alligator rappin The way he always bitting
D Saw I was Above his game & reported a UFO siting
Good...
feel like U leaning on nail beds tha way im stabbing ya back
The lost is to bad jus leave
.bcuz now "Mase" wouldnt "welcome you back"
Eh closer...
532, wasn't feeling the spit, too simplistic, plus I really don't dig mainstream rap references, plus your lines could have really used some beefing up because they were too flimsy to be effective
Stanza, good spits, all punches, 2 were a little weak, but the rest were solid....try incoprorating some more personals, but if that ain't your game, just stick with the punches...
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