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fixed cuz i had a typo in the first time posted

This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed
King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!!
Not to shabby...first line a bit played...6/10
Hate Bloods??.......but you pussy dont you bleed monthly or something?
You can write ya verse on ya bandanna and couldnt 'C' one of my punches!!
Didn't like this punch....3/10
That out the way newb basher everyone of us know that you wack
Slobk a gang banger of course!!!...all C.owards R.un I.N P.acks!!
This was good shit...8/10
Eleavation not in your future like popped balloons and crashed airlines
Plus you came to this battle shook since my name surrounds you like 5 times

Good play off his name...8/10

........... shit even you said that you trash!

Cuz in this battle you like little boxes on windshields........a EZ PASS!!

Hahaha, nice...7/10

Overall: 32/50

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Originally Posted by ::..:$lobK::..:

Im Shook Of This Fagget?..

Your Career Is Diminished..Dis "Nerd Goin Downhill".."Like Honor Roll Students On Ramps"..
I'm Shook? Homie Went Into "Witness Protection" Almost As Much Times As His Rank.. *
Nah....3/10
When He Lose..He Creates An Alias After..Homeboi Neva "Blessed" Like "Atheist Chapters"..
Think Ya Personality Is A Factor? Stop Playin Hard..We All Noe CALI Is The Place For Actors..
Second line was allright...didn't enjoy the first...5/10
I Cant Relate..With All The "Quakes" In CALI..Its Hard To Have Ur Mind In A "Steady State"..
Elevate? In A Room Filled With "Obese Kids"..The Only Time Peeps Think U A "Heavyweight"..
Way to forced man...5/10
D-ICE "Melted", U Couldnt Stand The "Heat"? Changed Ya Name But Failed To B Discreet..
Failure Creeped..So I Hope U Take "Poetry To Da Heart"..So U Could Finally "Rhyme To Beats"..
Not bad, good wordplay...7/10
Cocky Homo..Talk Out Ya Ass So Much..But Never Once Have I Seen This Queer Defend..
Sick When? "CALIPH" Emerged And Then Went To "CALI" Wen Da PH Scale Overtook Him.. **
Not feeling it....4/10

Overall: 24/50

... took this with harder punches, better flow, and a better verse..:..:$lobK::..: all your lines are streched and it really took away from your verse...

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