*Don't up your poems more then 3 times*....lmao, man i just erased 15 ups from you!!....ok, this poem was very good, your vocabulary and the whole topic was well portrayed and the imagery in your words was good as well, you told this concept well, and the flow of it was a joy to read, meaning, you didnt try too hard,as i often see people do,to put a bunch of meaningless words together to make it look more then it is...good drop

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