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Old 04-28-05, 03:41 PM   #5
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Great metaphors in this piece, i enjoyed reading this, great vocabulary,the way you set it up to display the areas of importance was great,armaggeddon and the apocalypse,dope piece,and the ending was perfect, keep em coming.1
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