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Old 04-28-05, 03:49 PM   #17
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Voted For: Young Blaze

Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention
Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension
Little stretched, but aight...
Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee
Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy
Could have been stronger...
Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up
You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up
OK...
Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice
It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice
Ha...
Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer
13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number
Eh........weak...



I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook…
Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books..
Ha....OK
Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son.
Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!!
Eh... not feeling it....
Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash..
Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft...
OK...
A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter…
The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater…
Damn...
With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness..
Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas..
Good closer..

I'm not big on the pop culture references, but I usually don't factor that into the vote..personals and connection between lines went to 523, but Blaze had complexity and multis hands down...523's first two bars really could have used some tweaking, the punch wasn't as heavy as it could have been.....Some of Blaze's lines were stretched, but humor and punches made up for that, but he wins my vote by opening strong with a complex multi and closing with a nice personal..
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