Voted For: Young Blaze

ok heres how it goes

I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook…
Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books..
6/10...6 cuz the 2nd line was good but first wasnt, nice punch though
Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son.
Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!!
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7/10...nice punch here,sticking with the 'D' shit...it helped the punch out
Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash..
Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft...
5/10...this punch is pretty played and first line was badA Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter…
The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater…
6/10...wasnt really feelin the heater lineWith Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness..
Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas..
5/10...didnt like the last line, it was bad
29/50

Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention
Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension
7/10...woodve got better but the first line wasnt great...but 2nd line was nice
Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee
Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy
6/10...also had a wack first line but 2nd was niceYour rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up
You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up
4/10...wack, both played ass hell
Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice
It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice
6/10...decent personals, line was stretched though
Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer
13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number
5/10...played
28/50

overall:
nice battle here, both have good openers but should improve on closers, also d523 could upp the multies,both have nice personals and punches, also both need to try and make each line of the bar have a nice punch othwise the first line is useless...nice battle here though

v/ young blaze