Voted For: ...

sorry wicked, we still cool, lol, but ne way,

im gonna have to go with ..., althgouh structure does ahve a meanign in certain poems, this piece was very nice,the imagery and emotion was intense,the ending was also good, this felt like time was put into it, and it truly came from deep, it pulled me in farther as each line passed by, good mteaphors and similes used also...

wicked, yours was cool but def. could have been better...i felt like your verse was that deep, the imagery and emotion just wasnt there, yet it DID seem as though the emotion wasa attempted, i could relate to it though but you had hard competition, it seemed like the wordchoice wasnt too great on like 1 or 2 lines, i also didnt find any metaphors or similes, this was good thoguh, dont get me wrong

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