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Old 04-28-05, 05:33 PM   #17
B. Magik
Sam Dope
 
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Marv:

Opener: 7/10
Punches: 9/10
Wordplay: 8/10
Personals: 7/10
Structure and flow: 8/10
Closer: 9/10
Overall: 48/60=80%

Overall A hot verse from you man...Opener was a little weak, but everything picked up in a hurry after that...Personals and plays on his name were hot, along with your punches

SoLo:

Opener: 8/10
Punches: 8/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Personals: 7/10
Structure and flow: 8/10
Closer: 6/10
Overall: 44/60=73%

Your verse was good man...Nothing really wrong with it, but I feel you could've came harder with the punches and upped your wordplay a little bit...The "runnin shit" line was kinda played, but you did a good job wording it...Your closer was wack to me...Not a good way to go out...Good battle though...RTF with links in my sig if u haven't done so already...
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