leave you rest'n pz's
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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK
wutever skill level you at, im two times better that
ya reppin the arch, then im the m on a mickey dees bag
^^decent opener, but not hard hitting...5/10
even if my punches were average, you'd be that little orange fish *1
ill throw rocks at your house, and leave your door witta sore-henge
^^nice scheme but punch was weak..5/10
your a chicken AND a fag....you stay fighting with them cocks
have you hiding behind the counter, like viagra, in children shops
^^viagra in children shops?...hmm, lol,,,6/10
im owning this ho, like putting a sold, sign on a golf course
remember microcker, he had the same DNA as yours
^^set up was koo, but you messed up the punch...4/10
im constantly stealing your spotlight, like flashlight thieves
matter fact, it left you in the black, magik,vanish pleeze
^^decent closer, nameplay was ok, 6/10
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26/50
overall you had some decent concepts but need to work on makin your punches hit, none of them really connected well
its like you focused to much on complexity n forgot to diss your opponent...no real good personals either....
try to focus your verse more on your opponent next time
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This kid is weak........you 6-0? shit, watch me end his streak
Try and stop me, get thrown "in a box" like "hockey penalties"
^^way forced ryhme scheme...5/10
I'll cave your face in, and if you doubt my game's amazing
I'll fuckin' "eat you dogg"............. but I "aint no asian" *
^^well worded, punch connected...7/10
You schoolin' this vet, won't happen like you rulin' at text
How you hard when you're 14 and haven't hit puberty yet? **
^^played concept(this punch is in the rv tutorials)4/10
This fag is nothin, real emcees can see past his bluffin'
And he's 6-0, because he calls my home, and asks for punches***
^^nice personal(if its true).....7/10
Just face it, you're weak kid, I'll leave your face in the cement
.........This fake "couldn't be sick" if he caught "fatal diseases"
^^weak closer but still ok, 5/10
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28/50
overall you were more consistent, creativity needs work but
you had 2 punches that hit well n won this battle for ya.
up your vocab n complexity, you also lost marks for having a very forced ryhme scheme on a couple bars...no hate
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close battle to both........RTF IN THE SIG
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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