Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
aight
pretty decent battle here y'all...
B.C:
Pretty decent verse, the main thing i'ma fault is that you seem ta have a certain style with your flow that suites O.M's but dosent really have an effect in battles.....overall ya had some decent ideas, few nice bars with good wordplay, but ya personals an punches have ta stand out, an sorry but i cant really say ''oooh'' ta any of your lines, no hate...you know u my boy, an i dont like voting against my peoples, but i need ta get some votes on my shit lol
Kin:
good verse, structure is fuckin awful
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each line seperated an not all bunched up, maybe you got the strucre from another site or somthin but anyway...ya had dope rhymes, good hard hittin creative punchlines that get u the win.................
RTF Y'all
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