E-Style, Bitch.
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Voted For: PreZidict
woah, okay...
Prez got this
much better verse, consistancy an structure hands down
Illest, some lines had like 5 words, others had 25 words, fix that, yeah? make each line of an equal or somewhat equal length
Prez, ya had the better punchlines, some shit had me like ''oooh''...for example..
y u like 2 brag? when da win in text is da only "1" u had! *
his name is "red n blue" but how u go from a "slob 2 a crab?" **
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that was real nice..............
u had the highlight of the battle, the better flow an structure, wordplay was good too...overrall prez hands down
Illest, up ya game dogg, u know its bad when u have a bar that looks like;
Yo ass cant *CATCH* a verse like *FREDDY* Mitchell with that football/
Dont be surpirsed if I *DISPATCH* my arsenal and shoot yo ass down like John *KENNEDY* usin a nerf ball/
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wasnt feelin that an i got bored reading alot of your lines, took too long ta get ta the point
fix dat
RETURN THE FAVE YALL, In My Battle with J-DOT...Thanks
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