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Old 04-28-05, 06:22 PM   #24
O.V.Dose
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This was feedback posted for Verbal

IP:

Flow - Verbal's flow was slightly better and his structure was a lot easier to read

Punches - Verbal had a few pretty good punches while i wasnt really feeling Pre's. it seemed like he was trying to hard to connect. both had some played concepts

Personals - Neither really had any personals

Multies - PreZ had a lot more multi's but it seemed he was tryin more for multi's than hard punches. Verbal had less multi's but came with harder punches

Vocab - neither was too good. Verbal repeated himself a few times and that took away from your verse a little

Originality - Verbal was more original, he had some played lines but not as many as PreZ. that "dog" and "bitch" thing has been played to DEATH