Thread: D523 vs stanza
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Old 04-28-05, 06:31 PM   #33
O.V.Dose
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This was feedback posted for Stanza

IP:

Flow - I wasnt really feeling either flow, the lines seemed too short

Punches - Nothing spectacular but stanza's last two bars were alright

Personals - D had more personals but none of them really hit hard.

Multies - tied because they both had a bar with words rhyming with "shit"

Vocab - both werent very good, elevate

Originality - a lot of both of your verses were played but d came more original...just not hard hitting. Water/flow is hella played and so are "heavy/lightweight" lines

but overall Stanza won this because he had a couple decent punches at the end and i didnt feel D had anything to compete with them