Voted For: Tephlon
dun da da dun!!!! *Solo the SuperVoter Is Here!!*
Great God!!! Holy Fuckin Hairy Monkey Balls!!!!
that is one LLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNGGGGGGG ass verse man, entirely unnecessary, and all that shit before it wasn't really necessary either....sooooo many numbers!!!!
Tephlon..........what's up bitch!!! hows life in the Councilment!!
ya opener was kinda weak, the 1st line licked ass cuz it is sum played shit, the 2nd line was quite funny though *chuckle* ya closer was better....you set shit up nice and the final line was quite funny to *another chuckle* in between you had a verse full of ups and downs....u had some nice shit followed by some ass shit!!! ya vocab was basic in places but then better in other places....ya had sum nice wordplay in there....dunno what is up with all them ............................... but anyway ya need to cut down on ya lines man.... just drop a 12 line verse cuz ya shit takes forever to read........adn get a bit more consistent with ya punches.........ya structure is lookin nice now........ya shit flowed well and as i go over it all i give ya verse a decent 7/10
GKillaz05................old fam man, wat up.....*thinks back to them gud old days in LyriKal DestruKtion*.......right then hoecakez.......ya structure was tight man, shit was like a box yo, gud shit....the flow was nice to i was feelin ya verse right through, it went well.....ya opener started off decent but the 2nd line blew like a nose on tissue....kind of self-glorifyin which is gay....the closer was similar the first line was aight but the braille shit is gettin tired like an insomniac....2nd line was pretty much filler.......in between ya verse was wack man, i aint tryin to hate cuz u old fam 'n' all but it is obvious that ya rusty cuz ya lines were all basic shit and filler....nuthin creative at all.......ya need to get with some creativity and drop some wordplay n shit.....make ya verse stand out like *KAPOW* there it is......overall a dismal 5/10
V/ - Tephlon <----don't argue with that or you'll get Solo-Slapped Hoez!!!!
Return the favour on one of my open battles!!! Links are in the siggy as always......and if ya don't RTF I will fly back in here and get my vote removed!!!!
Peace Out Homiez!!!!
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*Flys Outta Here In Search Of Another Battle To Vote On*