Voted For: Newkid

when i clap things..........you gon b layin on ya BaK KiNg
'skriptz still aint loyal'..no matta how much he beg n 'write BlaK QuEEn'
6/10...decent opener
u wanna be a thug...onli hood u live n iz ya coat head-space
think he push pounds....but like'BiGGie now'u dealin sum 'DEAD WEIGHT'
7/10...first was played a lil, but the second made up for it
yo i was n 'LA' ya momz was on mah dik so i had 2 'dodg-er'
cuz she kept 'throwin her head at mah ballz' like a 'game of soccer'
7/10...lol, funny shit
ya name SkRiPtZ....but like ya keyboard don't work ya 'TeXt Iz OfF'
n da 'AnSwEr'2 ya sig iz...dat ya wak ass verse iz wat DaViD WeSlEy FaLl
5/10...not a good closer
25/40

Newkid...aka Kordozar's brother...have we even met?*
Practically has so many wins...he's not even a vet
5/10...wasnt feelin it
Fag will never be ready...like kids who get pop quizzes
He signed up for the punchline league...
.........................but he doesn't know what that is
6/10...secon line was wack, first was nice thoughLooking like a retard kid...shades looked like there cracked
Typing Like This ...will probably give you more Impact
6/10...thoguh it had links, they werent that effective
Your skillz are shit...cause they are looking like mold
Only time you think your rhymes are dark...
.................................is when your typing in bold
5/10...not a good closer
22/40

both shoood improve their closers and multies, skriptz i kno you kooda came harder, but jsut didnt in this one, so sry, but ima have to vote against ya here

v/newkid

rtf

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