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Old 04-28-05, 08:16 PM   #30
Wet Willy
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Voted For: Lay-Text

meh this battle was pretty good.. not the best i have seen.. but decent. i really couldnt pick up on a nice rhyme scheme from golden... both of u over-vocabbed a bit.. but some of lay-text's lines really came with nice imagery.. overall good emotion from both.. R- i really like how u got the reader involved into ur piece. meh decent battle but vote goes to LT.. just cause he came with a bit more imagery and just a nicer verse all around..
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