leave you rest'n pz's
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Voted For: 9th Degree
I can smell the sweetness in you cause you rosary lad
if you was real your family ties wouldn't be for grocery bags
^^decent, ok opener
you supposed to be bad? you only got drive cause you gassed
ya voice is nice but it don't help when you talkin outta ya ass
^^eh, kinda ruined it by complimenting him...
and yea you hungry but you the type to starve in a tub of rice
you only cold wakin up after parties in a tub of ice
^^colds a diss?..wasnt feelin the punch homie
only i don't feel a pulse, so get way low fast your like j-lo's ass
your flo and her marriage they ain't gon last
^^decent setup, but ya punch lacked content
You had a 50-50 Chance tryin to battle these wack cats
but dog you split your chances just playin wit "black"jack"
^^ok concept but punch didnt connect
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overall your verse had good concepts but you either worded them off or they had bad delivery...bnasically your punches were lackin n didnt hit hard...good attempt though...
think you shouldve takin a lil more time n it wouldve been much better no hate ........
You're too cocky about text, I keyed this up demure
So you hopped off your high horse, and landed in the manure
^^lol,. decent opener...
If your rhymes go over my head, mine put a dent in your wig
Your talent is as existent as the crew you rep in your sig
^^oh, that connected, decent punch ...
Lyrical Assassins? Where's their forum, I don't understand this kid
Oh, he's the lost hero...the rest of them abandoned him
^^lol,....damn way to play on the sig
And I'd say he was a dickrider, but that might be hatin'
So why's he got links to battles he didn't partake in?
^^lol,...nice, consistent so far
You're fakin', not hard, got more than a pot to piss in
And I'm wack, 'cuz they say "you're only as good as your opposition"
^^lmao, nice closer
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overall 9th, you played on his sig well, n nice flips on the punches, really consistent verse, i liked this drop, well rounded disses...normally i see a weak bar in ya verses but this 1 was real solid throughout...
no hate 9th got this with way more creativity n better punches, all of them connected...good battle
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RTF in the sig
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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