Voted For: hotshh!

Damn seriously this is the best battle i've ever read in my life here in rv.. but yeah neway..

marv.. yeah man you came hot as hell as always.. your punchlines were very good.. and came very creative.. but once again as always your stucture is off.. n sorta your flow at times..

rate: 8/10

hotshh!:

damn man seriously you hella surprised me.. I had no idea that you were actually this good.. damn well neway.. your structure was pretty good.. and flow was on point in this one.. but damn man.. your lines were just plain amazing.. way more then just being creative.. just crazy as hell seriously man.. almost about every bar in ur verse was just hott.. wel yeah

My favorite line was:
So of course marv J "runshit"....... he too broke for a Whip!!
Da last time u hopped on anything dat move, was Strobe Dick
and
U need 2 eave son, no beast on the beat, we dont Believe em
U only visit "trackmasters" when ya girl gets her Weave done
So say hello to Defeat......... and kiss goodbye your Streak
Nightmares? HA!....... america reads ya shit to fall Asleep
(silly internet geeks!!)

weeerd

9/10

vote: Hotshh!

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