Voted For: Wickedclown

This was a decent poetry battle. It was a wierd topic "my home". Both of you seemed to stray off on the topic a lil and used your own creatvity which was koo. Cali i noticed you tryed to have lots of detail which you did, but it lacked in some areas, and some parts seemed to rhyme just because..
Wicked has wayyy more multies which made it fun to read and very easy to follow. Wicked seemed to be on subject a lil more than cali did. cali seemed to stray off subject in the middle a lil. Cali had bigger vocab and wicked had better structure and his seemed more on subject. So ima have to say wicked on this one.

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