lol,....damn, i dont think alot of people will get the whole of this
piece, i mean the vocab, and concept prolly flys over their heads
imagery n silimies were nice throughout,"metaphorically speakin"
was a good topic to tackle, i found it a little repetitive with the
"i, to..." but it worked with this topic, i liked how you touched on alot
of different views n blended them together, it was long...
ending was pretty koo, how you stated you may be ignored
cuz your only speakin metaphorically.....overall dope drop fam
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we also talked bout this on msn, you kno my thoughts on this piece

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!