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This was an iight peice... Could have been alot better
Structure was Good , ...You had nice wordplay, ...
Pretty good vocab , your punchlines were good ,
some nice personals , i felt some lines were pretty much
fillers , you could have made harder punchlines
I can see it took some time to do , and it was an okay drop
Overall keep it up ,
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