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This was an iight peice..could have been better..
Wordplay was good , nice vocab , i felt it could have been alittle better
though..Nice structure.... really was feeling the topic..
I felt that the concept could have been alot better...
In my opinion... I also felt , that you could have used
alittle more imagery. You had nice feeling , and good imagery..
Overall this was a good peice...i was really feeling it..
Keep it up
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