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This was pretty nice peice..
It was good , i felt it could have been alittle better..
You had nice structure..and some okay punchlines..
I felt you could have used better punchlines , and less fillers..
Elevate your wordplay, and your vocab ,...
Overeall this was an okay diss i felt it could have been alot better...
Keep it up , and you'll elevate over time ..
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