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Wicked- Nice emotion, man you need to step up in your imaginary. You had imaginary but it wasn't great nor weak, it was just average. Now you need to learn how to put meta'z in your verse...........In poetry "meta'z" are a big thing, believe man. Vocab was average, not great, nor weak. The only thing that was weak in this verse was imaginary, step up your game bruh.




CALI- aiight man. Imaginary was good, pretty decent. Upp your vocab. The emotion was ok, still needs to elevate. Vocab was ok, using them everyday words. You also had meta'z, which was nice to add some picture into your imaginary.

Overall=nice writings from both head'z. Wicked you came hard with the emotion, but weak in the imaginary, plus meta'z. Vocab wasn't that good either. Wicked you came harder with the imaginary, and you add meta'z. The emotion was ok, but still wasn't better than wicked. But thou that wicked had weak imaginary, but no meta'z. I'mma have to vote for Cali, cause he came better with the imaginary and added meta'z, to paint a perfect picture in his verse.

Vote/ cali................pz

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