Voted For: ...

word, this was pretty cool, dont see the poetry battles too much anymore

wickedclown, i thought you lacked imagery, big time.....you had nice flow and everything, i think you spent way too much time on that, and making a perfect structure, instead of imploying the creative, imaginative aspects of poetry...it was a nice story and all, but didn't have the imagery man, sorry, but still, props to ya for writing a solid piece, cause it had good emotion, just missin out on the imagery, and i thought ... was more consistent with both those aspects

..., i was really feelin this, cool the way you described some of the stuff....didn't like the last line though, meh, but overall, this was bursting with imagery, good emotion, and lots of the shit is true man, and you described it so vividly ya hear, anyways, i thought you had the better piece....better imagery, probly even in emotion, vocab, you had better...so thats why you gettin my vote

props to both though, both had enjoyable verses to read, ... was better though

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