Voted For: ...
OK.....
I was feelin clown's verse, only prob is I really couldnt see any way it tied into the subject correctly.. Basically I'ma say props for the good verse, but I think ... is gonna edge you out just cause his stayed on track the whole way through..
Its kinda a shame to, cause his did seem kinda exhadurated and over done trynna push forward imagry.. But I guess thats what poetry is.. Look good battle, close.. But yeah I'ma give this one to '...' .......... that dude..
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