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Wickedclown: I like how you approached the topic that was given but I feel you could've worked it out a bit different. The emotion was the strongest aspect of your verse due to the interpretation of the topic, imagery was good as well but I don't know how to put it. I just feel like you could've come more original, it's lacking a bit of creativity. I'm not hating here, I like your verse no doubt about that but it was sort of predictable here and there you feel me? The emotion was very strong and pure which really made me enjoy your piece. Vocab was good as well, imagery also...I could picture someone walking around in an empty home, missing his loved one. So only negative side is the creativity you know...I mean, the way you interpretated the topic isn't cliché whatsoever but the way you worked it out in detail is...

John Holmes: whoa, dope piece in my opinion. Might have gone with a more obvious way to interpretate the topic but the way you worked it out was excellent. The imagery was at a high due to the words you were using, I could picture all these scenes in my mind as if I was watching a movie being played in front of my eyes! And throughout that great imagery you portrayed such a raw emotion as well. I love how you built up all these contradictions between light and dark, warmth and cold et cetera. Kept me focussed throughout the whole read due to the vivid way in which you expressed everything, had to read it few times to fully grasp the entire piece but this is top A game for sure.

Vote goes to John Holmes, no hate whatsoever, just voting for the more intruiging piece!

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